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10 Tips for Writing Action Alerts  

These ten steps are meant to guide GAIA members in preparing useful action alerts. Remember, action alerts which are clear, brief, and request simple actions will get the biggest responses. Once you've drafted an action alert, email it to gaia@no-burn.org and the GAIA Secretariat will work with you to get the it on the GAIA web page and distributed on email lists.

1. Be concise (1-2 page maximum)

2. Identify your issue including:

a. Background history (~one paragraph)
b. Present situation (~one paragraph)
c. Demands. What do you want? Ex. An Incinerator stopped? A policy changed?
d. Targets of Action with postal address, email address and fax number (two maximum)

3. Include a date. Always include the time frame in which the action alert is valid. If your recommended action has an essential time-line (e.g., write your senator by June 27, 2001), then state that clearly.

4. Provide action steps. The easier an action, the more people will do it. Include a What You Can Do" section in the alert. Keep these steps clear and concise. Include up to four key points that readers should stress in their letters, emails, etc…

5. Make it easy to understand. It is important to start with a clear headline that summarizes the issue and the recommended action. Use simple language. Check spelling. Use short paragraphs and sentences. Choose words that will be understood worldwide, not just in your country or culture.

6. Be compelling! If you want to inspire someone to do something, be inspirational. Speak from the heart about why this issue is important, what could be lost, and what can be saved, with GAIA members' help.

7. Include your organization's information. This helps establish authenticity of your alert, making it more credible to the activist community, and allows readers to know where to go for more information or clarification.

8. Provide readers with further reading. Remember your action alert can compel people to want to learn more about your issue. Aid them in finding additional background information by providing a short bibliography of good references for them to pursue. Provide websites that can assist in a greater understanding of the issue.

9. Request Copies of Letter Sent. The alert should indicate that a copy of the letter, email, etc… should be sent to the GAIA Secretariat, gaia.sec@surfshop.net.ph. This enables you to do several things:

a. Count the number of responses. This is important Compile a list of good responses you can use in further campaigning
b. Read people's arguments you might not have thought of
c. Find out who is interested in this topic, so that you can follow up with them later with thank you notes, updates, further actions, etc…

10. Follow these rules for posting on a list serve.
a. Include a phrase like post where appropriate" so that people are not encouraged to send the alert to mailing lists on unrelated topics.
b. If your information is sensitive and you do not want the alert forwarded to other lists, make sure that you say so. Be aware of security risks whenever you are transmitting information and never assume that email is private.

For further information regarding writing action alerts check out Phil Agre's web page: http://dlis.gseis.ucla.edu/people/pagre/alerts.html

See also http://alert.detizeme.cz/

ACTION ALERTS

 

     

ACTION ALERTS

Dear Friends,

ACTION ALERT

Please endorse before 20 February 2004

Warm greetings from the Global Anti-Incinerator Alliance / Global Alliance for Incinerator Alternatives (GAIA).

We are writing anew to appeal for your help and participation in stopping a controversial mega incinerator project for municipal solid waste in Malaysia: a mammoth 1,500 tonne/day waste burner that will cost 1.5 billion ringgit (about US$395 million) to construct and 200 million ringgit yearly (about US$53 million) to operate and maintain. Ebara Corporation, a major Japanese incinerator company, has won the contract to design and build the facility. Funding for the project is supposed to come from Japan.

This global petition, our second on Broga and addressed this time to Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi of Japan, is geared at averting Japanese funding for the incinerator project. We are asking the Japanese Premier not to use the yen to export harm. Our demands:

1. That the Japan Bank for International Cooperation, Japan International Cooperation Agency and other related offices stop promoting and funding the construction of waste incinerators in Asia and the Pacific and the rest of the world.

2. That Japanese incinerator companies desist from exporting their harmful and unsustainable products.

3. That Japan withdraws any funding commitment for the Broga incinerator project in Malaysia in view of the broad citizens? opposition.

You will recall that GAIA, in coordination with local communities and NGOs, petitioned the office of the then Prime Minister Dr. Mahathir Mohamad on 1 October 2003 asking his government to abandon the project and listen to the Rakyat (the local term for people). Over 230 groups and individuals from 39 countries signed the global petition, which added strength and force to the unrelenting action by engaged citizens and NGOs to block the incinerator proposal in favor of healthy and sustainable alternatives for managing discards.

The environmental impact assessment (EIA) report for the Broga incinerator proposal is still under review by the Department of Environment (DOE). Submissions made by concerned community groups and NGOs, which were largely based on the support from GAIA experts and other allies, were critical in delaying the approval of the EIA. Opponents have the option to challenge the project in court if and when the DOE approves the EIA.

We invite you to support this global petition to Prime Minister Koizumi and forestall possible use of Japanese money for building the unwanted waste facility.

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